Monday, March 07, 2011

Magpie Tales

  Sweet Memory



Around and around and around.  She rode her bike/roller skates/horse/race car/ fast and hard.  The exhilaration of the win was sublime.  No matter that she was the only one in the race, or that the track was the suburban cement driveway in front of the cookie cutter 1950s California ranch-style home.  There were few distractions to mar her dedication save one:  that smell.  Nearing 5 o’clock, it was always the lure that would end the game.  Irresistible it was.  The clink of ice cubes in the cocktail shaker, the call to the family pet that it was dinner time, the escaping music notes from the hi-fi, and the incredible aroma of onions, peppers, and garlic sizzling in the pan in preparation for something
sumptuous to come.  It was of no importance what the actual dinner would be.  It was the smell that always drew her inside.  The smell and the promise of coziness and warmth and comfortable chatter.  The love and the place and the knowledge of home.


My very first Magpie Tales post (first time jitters!).  Check out all the fantastic writing on the Magpie Tales site.  Photo by Tess Kinkaid.

18 comments:

Glenn Buttkus said...

Nice prose, Deb. It could be 60's,
even 70's, suspended in that
timeless realm of girlhood,
living in a rambler, skating in
a cul de sac; drawn back to the
nest by her nose, with garlic
smelling the loudest.

Elaine said...

Welcome. A nice write and a nice ride. Well done!

Shari said...

What happy childhood memories! My mom only made meat and potatoes. Good job. I enjoyed your post.

Tess Kincaid said...

Wonderful memories. Welcome to Magpie!

DebbyMc said...

Thanks for the welcome everyone!

Glenn, it was the 60s, early to mid. In the memory it was cold and blustery outside and the warm promises of the inside were always kept.

Tracy said...

"The love and the place and the knowledge of home." Lovely line that, Debby! I love how you've packed so much into such a short narrative--very evocative! :o)

Suz said...

I'm all a buzz over this piece,Bee!
Wonderful bit of writing. Mine was Chicago, l950's...
pork roast/sauerkraut and potatoes
and oh..that love
I only hope my children think on us that way...love, comfort ,safety,SANCTUARY! ;)
= home

gautami tripathy said...

I really like how we get so many ideas out of one photo. Everyone interpreting it differently.

viscous time

ms pie said...

amazing our sense of smell and what we associate those with... for me it is my mom's perfume...

Dana - Old Red Barn Co. said...

you are an amazing writer!

Words A Day said...

you really captured a childs imagination ("as she rode..")! And the power of smell, all it promises and the comfort it brings!

Tumblewords: said...

Delightful memories well imaged!

~T~ said...

A vivid scene. I sizzle some garlic most nights, too!

Trellissimo said...

Memories turned into very readable prose.

Helen said...

Oh, oh, oh ~ Illinois in the 50s. You have taken me way back, thank you!!!

Helena said...

I love how the smell of garlic draws the homely past to the front. Sends me in the opposite direction! It's a beautiful prose, though.

The Blog of Bee said...

What a delicious piece of writing.

Welcome!

Kathe W. said...

lovely piece- I remember well coming in the house to smell that wonderful smell of Mom's dinner!